I Miss You Most of All
Author: Novita Atmadja
When the sun try to trace me from the window..
I woke up then..
I see I was broken down..
Drawn..
But I miss you most of all
I want you see how I bleed..
I want you see when I became silence in the dark..
I want you see I was lost in the damn space..
Cause I miss you most of all
When my soul became blind..
When my heart became cold..
When my mind became lose..
Still I miss you most of all
I run from the crowd..
Sit in the darkest corner of the streets..
I run from you...
Can’t understand, I miss you most of all
Then…I was tired..
Tired to hide..
Tired to cry..
Tired to being alone..
Then…I see you..
Spread your hand.. smile over me..
Breaking all the frozen time..
Now... I know why I always miss you most of all...
Dedicate for BV
Reviews:
***** [Oct 30, 2006] by Tari
Huwwaaa.....poem ny ngingetin gw ama samuwan yg skrg gw ga tw dy dmn..dy
support gw kl gw lg down,,dy yg skrg plg gw kangenin..tp,,tau nggak,,blm
sempt gw ungkpn is ht gw,dy udah prgi..wkt itu gw ga tau ap yg msti gw
lakuin..hixx...now,,i miss u most of all...
thx bgt poemnya.. ^_^
**** [Oct 24, 2006] by Shoujo
I miss sum1 2...rindu banget...
* [Sep 12, 2005] by Muhammad
Ndak mudeng tuh.
***** [Aug 18, 2005] by Kancil
Thanks, puisinya gw bgt saat ini. Skrg ni gw lagi rindu berat ama someone, but I can't do anything, even just to say that I miss u....
**** [Aug 10, 2005] by Eggy
Ngingatin aq sama someone who I miss most of all...
**** [Jun 14, 2005] by Herni Salwa Abit
Its nice to know u.
**** [Apr 23, 2005] by Luna_chan
I like it very much.
***** [Apr 14, 2005] by Yohana
Gw berharap bgt kata "then I see u... spread ur hand... smile over me... breaking all the frozen time..." itu terjadi ma gw... it's so tauching...
**** [Apr 07, 2005] by Unknown
Tried to hide.. and did, tried to cry.. and did, tried to be alone and have been.. and yet I too am tired of hiding, crying, and being alone. Why do we fall despite it all? To hope is to also be afraid...
***** [Mar 03, 2005] by Linny
Wonderful.. Hey may I display your poem in my web, in www.willynillylinnyhere.blogspot.com... Your poem is so touching.
**** [Feb 03, 2005] by Che-Che
I LIKE IT....
**** [Feb 01, 2005] by Edy
You compose it well.
***** [Jan 24, 2005] by Nova
A heartranding but honest feeling described in a lovely way.
**** [Jan 18, 2005] by Opit
Hum.. makasih kei, kok too late?? Heheeh kebacanya gituh yah? Well, sebenernya poem itu dibikin buat someone yang support gue banget, but kadang gue try buat lari.. tapi kemanapun gue lari.. balik lagi.. I miss him most of all :) But.. makasiiiiiiiiiihhh bangeetttttt.
***** [Jan 14, 2005] by Kei
Ironically, it often happen to us after it was too late.